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d, h, l, f and t could all be a bit taller. Same for the line downwards from p.

It's pretty good, easier to read than most native speakers I'd say.

If I had to give a critique, I'd say the letters are rather round, so it can be hard to tell an 'a' from an 'o', but most people develop quirks like that in English so it's perfectly fine.

The tail of your 'a' could use a bit more definition

Firstly, your penmanship is great, better than mine as a native tech worker.

For some actual feedback, your letter sizes for the same letters are a bit inconsistent. That just takes practice.

You are writing at a bit of a slant. That is not wrong but not that common, at least in the states.

You are trying to stay within the lines and that is causing you to change the shape of the letters if they are too large.

Your f's could use a bit more curve. They look a little close to a t.

But seriously it looks great.

this handwriting is too good it's going to piss someone off

是很漂亮！It looks like a font. Extremely neat. Though, the "tails" on some of your letters are so short that they might be mistaken for other letters.

Like your P could be mistaken for a D

Very sweet penmanship!

It doesn't really look like handwriting, it's like you're copying/designing a digital font 🤔

Meaning it's really nicely done!

Looks good, just need to work on a few minor things:

All of the ascenders and descenders (lines that extend above and below) need to be longer, especially on the f, d and the p. Also make sure the line on the right side of the a is clear and noticeable, it looks a lot like an o because you can hardly see that line. Overall the round parts of letters like a, d, g, p, etc are a little too wide/fat, so that combined with the vertical line parts being too short makes them look too similar to an o.

That may sound like a lot of criticism, but overall it does look very good. It just takes a lot of words to try and describe these small issues.

I thought your ‘f’s were ‘t’s until i saw your ‘t’s. The tops of ‘d’ and ‘b’ could be longer to look less like ‘o’. Otherwise, very sharp!

Super neat, extremely readable. On a few you can tell you've taken a long time forming the letters, so probably just need to practice until you can write at a useful speed, while keeping it as neat.

Better than mine lol

Really, all you need to do is make sure you're fully closing the circular parts of the letters. Maybe make the tail on your "a" longer.

you have very legible and clean handwriting, but your proportions reduce legibility. all the letters do not have to be uniformly the same height, many need to be taller or shorter than others. if you look at the early writing books for children learning english you'll see that instead of there beibg one "tier" for the letters to sit on, there are actually two. Capital letters are twice as tall as most lowercase letters and the majority of a lowercase letter is still in the lower tier, but ascenders and descenders should be full height which helps make it a lot more distinct.

Much better than my own handwriting. The only real feedback I have is to continue the curve on the top of the lowercase f a little longer

Far far better than my handwriting has ever been

You want the top of 'f' to curve more, as well as the bottom of 'g'. Very readable

There is very little to criticize here. You've done a good job!

However, it looks like this might have been done very slowly and carefully, so I think you will benefit from practicing writing faster now. You have the shapes, now get the speed!

I think it looks really good.

I recommend exagerating the straight line on the lower case 'a' a bit more to distinguish it from 'o'. In context of the words you wrote it's easy to see when an 'a' is 'a' and 'o' is 'o', but words like 'sang' may look like either 'sang' or 'song'.

For the lower case 'd' i recommend extending the straight line a tad bit higher. It still looks distinctly like a 'd', but it's very, very, close to looking like a lower case 'a'.

Similar recommendation for the lower case 'p', extend the straight line just a tad bit more below the letter.

I think another comment recommended something similar for lower case 'h', but i actually think the way you write them is just fine.

However, overall, it looks a hell of a lot cleaner than what most native english speakers write. It's for sure cleaner than mine, but i use a mix of different letter styles.

I taught 3rd grade in the US, where kids are expected to have their printing correct and start to learn cursive. I'd say your writing is very neat and readable. It has some differences that most US adults develop when they've gotten used to cursive and then need to use printing. So nobody is going to have any trouble with reading this.

For instance, when little kids print, or US teachers teach it, the straight line on their e is horizontal. The stems on their a and m are straight and well-defined. Their v has a sharp point. Their f is tall, with a strong top hook and nothing below the sitting line. Their y and x made from two straight diagonal lines. And there's no slant. But after writing in cursive for awhile, many adults form their printing similarly to you.

The only thing I'd suggest you change is to make the top part of the f stronger and more hooked. That's the one letter that might cause confusion, even though your t has a tail to differentiate it. Your assignment doesn't include a q, but I suggest you be sure to curve or point its tail below the line in the opposite direction from the tail on your g.

All in all, well done.

I'd say the p's and a's need a bit more definition, but it's better than mine for sure. The x looks a little off, but definitely legible. Pretty good, 8.5/10.

The English writing is excellent but the Chinese looks sloppy here and there.

I agree with everything everyone already said about your ascenders and descenders. I also feel like most printing that I see, the bottom of curved letters (s, c, e) tend to be slightly larger than the top. Yours seem to be opposite.

your handwriting is a font. That's amazing.

it looks like a computer font, not very human-like. I like your Chinese handwriting though

Very neat, though it looks like you're afraid of ascenders and decenders. your f's look cut off at the top, your h's looks a little like n's, etc. Looks like you're trying to stick to a rule from a different alphabet that everything is the same height; the Latin alphabet doesn't work like that.

I am not a native english speaker, but my native langauge uses the latin alphabet. Your writing is really good especially when compared to for instance mine, when people see it they compare it with writing with a chicken's foot. At first glance I mistaked it for a font.

You're not going to become a doctor writing like that!

Better than mine

Exceptional. Better than most native writers. Only suggestion is that the ascenders and descenders (the bits that go above and below the lines in letters like l, p, b, d etc.) should be larger, aim for roughly 2/3 taller than a letter like x or o. f, and t ascend slightly less, about 1/3 taller than an x or o.

It's so neat. It's obvious it's not your first language. Beautiful

Tbh I genuenly thought it was printed, it looks almost textbook level perfect

Beautiful penmanship. My only comment is that your ascenders and descenders are too short. They should be just as tall as the base letter (that is: a "t" or "f" or "g" should be twice as tall as an "a" or "o". You can get lined paper with 4 lines instead of 2 lines if you find that easier to practice.

Yeah...I don't believe you this being handwriting.

(Jk, looks amazing. Almost like a font.)

Looks nice. Very readable.

Sexy… I wanna bang your hand.