[-] GojuRyu@lemmy.world 5 points 2 weeks ago

I would say yes and no. It is a game about evolution with some similarities but it is very focused on a realistic representation of evolution. This makes it a more complex game than spore and actively encourages many different niches not just agressive, peaceful and mixed as spore did.

Aldo currently they are working on finishong the cell stage and the beginning of the multicellular stage while have more in deapth discussion about the transition between the microscopic and macroscopic phases among other things.

[-] GojuRyu@lemmy.world 3 points 4 months ago

I’m not much af a fighting game person but I would second skullgirls just for the art/music design alone. It has a charm that I really liked.

[-] GojuRyu@lemmy.world 5 points 4 months ago

Mine would be Thrive, not so much due to its current gameplay, though it is okay, but moreso due to an unwavering commitment to a vision. It has gone on for years and is essentially a scientifically close to accurate version of spore. They have almost finished the single cell stage and are working some on the transition to multicellular now as I understand it. I find it to be an impressive project as it started from the disappointment with spore and has evolved into something that I would genuinely suggest as a learning tool in middle school biology class.

[-] GojuRyu@lemmy.world 3 points 5 months ago

It could easily be argued that weather having to deal in so high numbers is a con for F and the positive negative distinction of C is an easy to understand system of how far from snow are we. As others I don’t believe one is particularly better than the other for the purpose of describing day to day weather. Your arguments ring hollow to me and often seem based on heuristics for F and often with the “close to this value” caveat making it seem like a stretch.

[-] GojuRyu@lemmy.world 3 points 5 months ago

So yes as long as god sends people to the good place he can be as horrible as he wants to them before they die. Is there anything god could do that you would consider evil or unjust even if the people affected go to paradise at some point after? Or is not sending innocent bystanders he hurts to paradise the only thing god could do you would consider evil?

[-] GojuRyu@lemmy.world 5 points 5 months ago

Did he advocate for Trump over Biden?

[-] GojuRyu@lemmy.world 5 points 6 months ago

I had a hope for that link and I was not disappointed

[-] GojuRyu@lemmy.world 3 points 9 months ago

With how funky micro organisms are with sharing DNA I'm not sure it matters. I've heard it likened to the genetic tree turning into a bush instead whare it's a big mes of sharing of DNA across species.

[-] GojuRyu@lemmy.world 3 points 9 months ago

I'll add The Exploring Series as well, they have more long form videos and cover other subjects as well as SCP content. Both have great voices and I've fallen asleep to both before.

[-] GojuRyu@lemmy.world 4 points 10 months ago* (last edited 10 months ago)

Sure! I’m not a native speaker either, so some suggestions may not be all that good.

The first one I noticed is in the first paragraph. I’m unsure if it’s a mistake or an obscure word, but when googling the word “pacrossct” I got no related results.

In the second paragraph both the word centuries and thousands of years are used. I’d suggest replacing thousands of years with millennia to keep it consistent. That may be a personal preference however.

The phrase:

But over time, the thought that everyone, sooner or later, would become just a pile of ashes enclosed in an urn in the ground, became a cause of anxiety and bitterness for him.

This is a long sentence with a lot going on. It’s a bit difficult to parse the meaning of it and I think it would be beneficial to split it up a bit. Something like the following perhaps:

But over time he came to ponder how everyone, sooner or later, would end up as just a pile of ashes enclosed in an urn in the ground. This became a cause of growing anxiety and bitterness for him.

I tried to stay true to your phrasing except where it would cause repetition due to my changes or I felt it would otherwise lack an emphasis that the original had.

I think these were mostly what I noticed, though some of the parentheses also seemed a bit out of place to me.

Again I just want to reiterate that I really liked your story and this is just minor details. I hope I do not come off as overly nitpicky or negative.

I think it was mainly those two word choices that I noticed, as I got

[-] GojuRyu@lemmy.world 4 points 10 months ago

I enjoyed reading this. I found some hiccups and odd choice of words or format but overall i found it to be well written and well paced. A proper decent into madness story, framed nicely as a legend of old.

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