I kinda agree with some points but overall this feels awfully close to the neoliberal idea that you can ascribe personal responsibility to a systematic problem. The great bulk of climate change is not being driven by your neighbors, but by the usual companies, which can afford to line the pockets of politicians to stay unpunished.
I'd also add a big asterisk on point 4: direct action! The solarpunk vision is built on anarchist ideals; If you're in a situation where you can afford to, work together with like-minded individuals to bring the change you want. There's no need to wait for some boomer politician to consider how doing or not doing something will affect their career. Sometimes asking for forgiveness is easier than asking for permission.