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Are there any fiction readers out there who have time to spare? in c/comradeship@lemmygrad.ml

[-] cyrazure@lemmygrad.ml 5 points 4 months ago

Thanks, I sent a DM!

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Are there any fiction readers out there who have time to spare? (lemmygrad.ml)

submitted 4 months ago* (last edited 4 months ago) by cyrazure@lemmygrad.ml to c/comradeship@lemmygrad.ml

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I have a draft of a short book (~45k words) that's been sitting in my computer gathering electronic dust for a while because I'm too anxious to show anyone else outside of very close family. It's based in a shared paracosm we had as children, so I think it's doubly important to get some unbiased criticism from an online comrade.

I know there are designated online spaces for writers but I get massive imposter syndrome there. 😓 It's like a coming-of-age science fiction story, if that makes any sense.

DM me if interested, sorry for the ramble...

ChatGPT 3.5 Turbo and its Anthropic equivalent are total simps in c/technology@lemmygrad.ml

[-] cyrazure@lemmygrad.ml 11 points 4 months ago* (last edited 4 months ago)

just append "from a marxist perspective" afterwards and you should be good to go

LLMs are trained to appear as "unbiased" as possible to establishment ideas which just happens to be liberal

‘Giving us oxygen’: Italy turns to Cuba to help revive ailing health system in c/worldnews@lemmygrad.ml

[-] cyrazure@lemmygrad.ml 9 points 8 months ago* (last edited 8 months ago)

turtle island = north america

northern half of turtle island = canada

number of canadian doctors (96k) approximately equal to number of cuban doctors (94k)

I just heard that the DPRK is PatSoc. Thoughts? in c/comradeship@lemmygrad.ml

[-] cyrazure@lemmygrad.ml 5 points 11 months ago

that was a great read! thanks for that write-up