How would you describe your most recent dream in the form of a haiku/tanka/choka (don't be afraid to comment more than once) (lemm.ee)

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[-] lvxferre@lemmy.ml 5 points 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago)

exsuscitō
sed lūx non accendit
iam somniō

I wake myself up
But the light does not turn on
Still inside the dream

Note: in the Latin version I'm only counting two morae per syllable for the long vowels, not for the codas. (Japanese barely uses coda, if I do it here the verses get too long.) The English version disregards syllable weight.

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