Poetry
A community to celebrate published and OC works of poetry.
Welcome to !poetry
Guidelines & Community Rules
In addition to the general rules of lemmy.world:
Published Poetry
1a: Poetry posts should include the title and the author, when the author is known.
O.C. Poetry
2a: Sharing original poetry is encouraged, but it must be preceded by the tag "[OC]."
2b: If an [OC] post is requesting feedback, it should also follow with the "[FB]" tag. It would look like the following example:
[OC] [FB] Nothing Gold Can Stay
Feedback
All feedback should be given in good faith.
3a: All [FB] requests should be met with comments constructive in nature. It is okay to dislike parts of a poem, but make sure to explain why you feel that way.
3b: Feedback does not need to be extraordinary in nature. Simply expressing how a work makes you feel is often enough.
3c: Use the honor system. When you receive good feedback, return it in kind to another author. Everyone appreciates knowing their work is being read and appreciated.
As this community develops, these guidelines may be adjusted.
Formatting Help
Work in progress
To create a line break, use two spaces at the end of a line.
To create empty space, type .
Use four of these at the beginning of a line to create a standard indent.
UPDATE:
Some methods of access do not format markdown correctly. I am currently testing various apps and web interfaces to see what does and does not retain formatting.
In the interim, it is encouraged to post text poetry as you normally would, but to include a link at the beginning or end of the post with access to a website or image that retains the formatting as intended.
Other Poetry Communities
Poetry lovers unite! In the style of the fediverse, multiple poetry communities have arisen, and will continue to rise. I will try to keep a list here of communities across instances that are worth checking out!
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I think the most traditional turn for sonnet like this would be the “perchance to dream; aye, there’s the rub.”
It often is, but this poem isn't about the kind of death that includes an afterlife. That's just more life. This is an exhortation for nonexistence. I think that's what makes the volta tricky, is that the speaker knows exactly what they're asking for from the jump. Which I think is what makes it feel kind of like a prayer, the old school Catholic kind, not the non-denominational invocative freestyling where people just say whatever they want to god. When I was a kid we got all our prayers pre-written from the church, and those were the prayers we said. Feels... genre bending to have realizations in the middle of prayers, lol.
I meant more in the sense of: why does this sonnet exist? Why does the speaker stay around to pen and publish the poem? Hamlet fears what dreams may come; why this author?