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In any kind of persuasive writing like this I would focus on facts and outcomes. The formula is generally linking cause and effect back to the previous prescriptions you had. You don't want to use "weasel words" or suggest that you feel the previous prescribed amount was more effective. You want to assert that it was and this downgrade has risks to your health, pointing out the causal relationships between what the medicine does for you and its absence aggravating another condition.
So for example,
Same goes for the soap. You link to your surgical wounds and the risk of infection if you can't adequately bathe as a factual cause-effect chain and need.
I would leave the emotive parts out. If you have a back-and-forth correspondence with the GP and have exhausted the evidence-based reason these cuts are detrimental to your health then you can use an emotional appeal. I would also leave out the pharmacist and avoid acknowledging the cost. The cost is the argumentative lever they are using to degrade your supplies and you don't want to give it any merit in your appeal.
Feel free to post a draft here or dm, and I can offer more concrete feedback.
Oh, these are good ideas, thanks! I didn't even think of doing this. I will start working on a draft and try to post what I have tomorrow.
I don't think I can use my foot surgery as a reason in this way though. I currently have to wear "LimbO boots," in the shower, waterproof foot coverings as I have to keep my surgical dressings dry. So lack of a shower wouldn't harm my surgical sites. What the lack of the soap substitute does, is mean that I have to use normal soap, which flares the eczema up badly again and then it gets infected again. Then I have to either go to hospital or be prescribed antibiotic creams.
But yes, writing about how lack of migraine meds and eczema cream will adversely affect me is good. I've been admitted to hospital many times when my eczema gets very badly infected. I was going to use the cost of this as a reason why they should keep prescribing me the cream - it must be expensive for the NHS to keep admitting someone to hospital - what do you think?
The cost is the argumentative lever they are using to degrade your supplies and you don’t want to give it any merit in your appeal.
I don't have any real proof that this is why they're doing it though. The pharmacist did complain that my migraine tablets are very expensive, but the actual GP hasn't said anything about that. He just started giving me prescriptions for half the usual amount of eczema cream/soap substitute without a word about why, and has simply ignored my previous request for him to prescribe a full months worth of migraine tablets instead of the 8 a month he prescribes now.
You've nailed the cause-effect-outcome writing style, nice!
You're probably right, it is cheaper to give you 2x the $20 cream than $20 cream + a hospital visit and associated follow-up but imo that detracts from the focus of your healthcare outcomes. If you elect to follow my advice to ignore costs in your appeal, then noting the comparative cost to the NHS doesn't align with that line of reasoning.
I misunderstood, I thought thought the GP and pharmacist were aligned on the cost being problematic. But I would probably still avoid discussion costs. The comparative cost of giving you adequate supplies vs the cost of a potential hospital stay multiplied odds that, for example, the eczema flares up and becomes infected gives you an expected value to compare costs. And you might have noticed these are hard to quantify even if you had pricing info and it takes the argument to a weird what-if place where you probably won't win against a doctor.
Your metaphorical high ground is the higher allocation of pills and supplies has better outcomes for you and mitigates specific health risks of yours. You want to stay within that as much as possible.
OK thanks. I'll try writing up the draft tomorrow with only discussion about my health outcomes.