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[-] FunderPants@lemmy.ca 21 points 5 days ago

This article reads like AI wrote it. It repeats itself very early on the nature of offences, then it reads like the introduction to actual journalism before stopping cold.

[-] Kichae@lemmy.ca 5 points 5 days ago

I've been saying this for a while now, but AI articles read like bad high school essays. "State your thesis. Write a paragraph that echos your thesis. Say something that may or may not be related to your thesis. Finish by repeating your thesis."

[-] delirious_owl@discuss.online 1 points 4 days ago* (last edited 4 days ago)

Thsts how good articles are written by humans, though. Books too. Emails too

People should be able to speed read your content without missing the most important points, because its reiterated and stated in s few different ways

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