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Yes it makes sense. It would motivate them powerfully. But it's been done too many times, and it's too easy.

The rule makes you find more interesting ways of motivating them. Are they driven by bruised pride? By romance? By obsession? Anything is more interesting than rehashing the cliché Hollywood loves.


Similarly, don't make a villain more evil by saying "they're a dictator and also a kiddie-fiddler orremoved". That's just tacking on villainy.

That would be like having a right-wing US President, and saying "oh he's also aremoved and best friends with a child-trafficker" - lazy, unrealistic writing. Make your villains more nuanced please.

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[–] Kefla@hexbear.net 4 points 12 hours ago (2 children)

The problem was always "orphan assassins". Nobody in their backstory at all, parents dead, somehow a highly trained killer

I mean it makes sense to me that this kind of character would exist in a lot of settings. If you're a gang of assassins looking for new people to turn into killers, a war orphan who has already become somewhat desensitized to violence, may be easily manipulable by filling the role left by dead parents, and who has no one who will know to come looking for them if they disappear seems like a pretty solid candidate

[–] fox@hexbear.net 4 points 9 hours ago

Aha, and now you've created an interesting backstory with storytelling hooks! There was a war, the character is receptive to manipulation in exchange for comfort, and there's someone turning victims into soldiers.

[–] Runcible@hexbear.net 2 points 11 hours ago (1 children)

it makes sense but it tends to breed empty characters with no growth potential and no real hooks for storytelling

[–] Kefla@hexbear.net 2 points 11 hours ago

I suppose it can. That's why the assassin gang/teacher(s) should fill the roles normally filled by family for that character. You can tell all kinds of stories about questioning the philosophy which supports being hired murderers, or recognizing and gaining distance from the abusive relationship which turned one into a killer, etc. I feel like a lot of these kinds of characters tell very interesting stories about figuring out who you want to be and learning that your mentors or parent figures aren't necessarily good people.