I’m interested in how much visual blockage a photograph can carry before it stops feeling layered and starts feeling cluttered.
Here the foreground heads are dark and heavy, but they also place the viewer inside the crowd rather than outside the scene.
The black and white edit flattens the museum space a little, which may help connect the painted figures, the guide, and the visitors.
Would you crop or lift the foreground, or does the weight at the bottom make the image work?
Thanks, this is really useful. I was thinking of it less as a portrait and more as a street/museum scene where the guide, the painting and the audience all compete a bit. Your point about the crowd framing the guide without taking over is close to what I was hoping for. The flatter angle may be the real limitation here.