Wrapped up the first book after much struggle. Am I crazy for finding it extremely poorly written? Writing aside, the characters suck, the motivations suck, and the scenario building feels like it was tossed together by a 12 year old. I don't get the hype. Everything is paper thin. The fictional science aspect is the most compelling part but as a cohesive whole it fails to land.

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[–] Pringles@sopuli.xyz 4 points 6 days ago

I know it falls apart quickly, but I still like it as a concept. I also like dragons, magic and immortal beings as concepts.