My only criticism might be this line
OK, the dungeon descriptions aren't as tactile or parsable as what the OSR standard has established.
I know earlier the author said they come from more of the OSR space, but I think this line might lend itself to being misinterpereted that the TOR2e supplement is trying to be for an OSR style game and has come up somewhat short.
Otherwise, good writeup.
I started getting this after I got diagnosed with diabetes, because I started eating way less junk food, so my salt intake went down. My blood pressure is usually on the low end now. It's annoying, and I've talked to my doctor about it but she mostly said to drink more water.